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|    William Vetter to All    |
|    Re: To be interesting    |
|    23 Nov 14 01:11:23    |
      From: mdhangton@gmail.com              It happens that J.Pascal formulated :       > On Saturday, November 22, 2014 1:44:48 PM UTC-7, William Vetter wrote:       >> Some time ago, I read one of those books...this one was about openings.       >> It's thesis was the belief that it is possible to write an opening so       >> strong, that editors, literary agents, readers, publishing executives       >> are compelled to read on. One of the examples mentioned the       >> assassination of JFK in the first sentence. Author claimed that this       >> made it so interesting that people MUST read it.       >>       >> What I thought was that, "There are a lot of books about JFK. Why       >> should I read this one?"       >>       >> Of course, we want to be interesting, the get the quality of being       >> interesting. What do you think makes a fragment or piece of writing       >> interesting?       >       > I think it's different for different people.       >       > Your example is a good one. Lots of people would think, Oh, JFK again? Yawn.       >       > "The first time I died I..." might get an, Oh! More!, or else it might get,       > Ew, gimmick much? Or else, yawn, vampire, right?       >       > I don't think that the question itself, of how to craft that one beginning       > that is so strong that no one can put it down, is particularly valid.       > Obviously the creature does not exist. I think that it might be more useful       > to think in terms of who am I writing for and how do I get my audience not to       > set the book down. If my audience begins and ends at "agent, publisher's       > slush reader and Editor" that's a particular challenge, and frankly the only       > one that doesn't have cover art to help you out.       >       Once I read a short story in one of the 4 magazines. I only remember       the opening. It was one of those flash forward openings. A character       shot another character's Roman nose off with a pistol because the nose       annoyed him. I remember it because it was obvious as a hook.              Was it interesting? Maybe. It was violent action.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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