From: mbottorff@lshelby.com   
      
   Will in New Haven  wrote:   
      
   > > But I had betareaders complain that it was too confusing.  :(   
   > >   
   > It could be. The test for me would be whether it was interesting enough to   
   > put up with the confusion.   
      
   Alas, it really didn't seem to add enough to be worth it.   
      
   But in my head, the language still works that way.  What you see in the   
   book is a simplification created during the translation process. :)   
      
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