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|    Sea Wasp (Ryk E. Spoor) to bobthrollop@gmail.com    |
|    Re: Um....where is everybody?    |
|    14 Dec 18 06:58:35    |
      From: seawasp@sgeinc.invalid.com              On 12/12/18 5:38 PM, bobthrollop@gmail.com wrote:       > On Tuesday, August 21, 2018 at 10:50:41 PM UTC-7, Johnny Tindalos wrote:       >> Hullo rasfc'ers, where did everyone go? Have we changed venue?       >       > I'm dropping back in after a hiatus of nearly ten years...I stopped posting       because I'd just run out of things to say. I never did learn how to write,       either.       >       > I took up one of my old story beginnings last week and started working on it       again, and I got bogged down about two pages in. This time, I identified a       problem in my style that I never noticed before, and right now I'm thinking       about how to overcome        it.       >       > The problem is that everything I write is from exactly the same point of       view and when the story requires a change, I can't do it. I've been looking       over whatever fiction books happened to be sitting around and studying, much       more carefully than ever        before, how different point of view effects are achieved.                             Whether that's a PROBLEM depends on what that point of view is, I       guess. I mean, the entirety of any first-person novel, of which there       are many, is told from that one character's point of view. There's never       a change of point of view, because that's the POINT of the first-person       novel; you see things as they are seen from the one main character's (or       sometimes a sidekick of the main character) point of view.               I always think of "Point of View" as "where is the camera and       microphone located?". In First Person, it's located right on the head of       the main character. You can see only what they see, know only what they       know, etc. In Third Person, the camera is focused on the current PoV       character, but from a remove.                                          --        Sea Wasp        /^\        ;;;        Website: http://www.grandcentralarena.com Blog:       http://seawasp.dreamwidth.org              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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