From: A_Tina_Hall@kruemel.org   
      
   On 31.01.19, Capuchin   wrote:   
   > On 21 Jan 2019 "A. Tina Hall"  wrote:   
      
   >>>>>> What about possible injuries?   
      
   >> I'm suggesting you put something into the actual story text.   
      
   > Done!   
      
   > It might not be splendid, inspired, or inspiring prose, but it   
   > actually is a little better than what I had.   
      
   > When he's on his first assignment:   
      
   Oh, so it's not where I meant.   
      
   The thought was that the question about injuries turns up during the   
   interview, before signing any contract.   
      
   That may not bug most people, though. You'd have to make a poll to find   
   out if more than just 2 would even ask the question. :)   
      
   > *****   
      
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   > *****   
      
   > Crits and comments are always welcome.   
      
   Interesting scene.   
      
   I like the way you write (I mentioned that before). "Prose" sounds like   
   something unnatural, hard to read, so I'd not aim for that anyway. :)   
   (Checking for a definite definition, it seems prose itself means   
   ordinary or uninspired, hah.)   
      
   Can't really find anything to complain about in this bit that can't be   
   blamed on my still a bit spongy head. (I have/had a cold or something,   
   fortunately headache's gone thanks to the wonder of paracetamol, but I   
   wasn't too fit those last days.)   
      
   --   
   "I'm sure Gorash has a good reason for not chucking both of you into the   
   ocean."   
    -- Pherneahl to Tashen and Lanar, Seasons & Elements 2/3: Controlling the   
   Magic   
      
      
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