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|    Brian P. to All    |
|    Two names for a character    |
|    07 Feb 19 05:26:37    |
      From: bobthrollop@gmail.com              My latest story is coming along in fits and starts. I've noticed myself doing       something that I fear might look terribly amateurish in the finished work.        Half of the time I refer to my heroine by her name, Eleanor, and the other       half of the time I call        her Ellie, according to the mood of the paragraph. It bothers me to use one       name when I think the other fits better.              I can't think of another written work in which the narrative voice doesn't       settle on one of a character's possible names and stick with it. Does anyone       see any possible chance that this tactic will work, or is it just going to       look dumb when it's all        done?              I don't think reader confusion is an issue here, as there are very few named       characters and none with a name at all similar.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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