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   Chandra P Das to Will Dockery   
   Re: Three Bad Poems [part one]   
   27 Feb 05 04:01:28   
   
   XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments   
   From: vze1sar1@verizon.net   
      
   Will Dockery wrote:   
   > Karla wrote:   
   >   
   >>On 26 Feb 2005 13:07:23 -0800, "Will Dockery"   
   >   
   >  wrote:   
   >   
   >>>>>JRS is by far the worst poet of the three, a pretentious mess of   
   >   
   > bad   
   >   
   >>>>>Jim Morrison imitations...   
   >>>>   
   >>>>Please elaborate.  Which lines are imitations of which Jim   
   >   
   > Morrison's   
   >   
   >>>>lines?   
   >>   
   >>   
   >>>But basically, the *entire* poem smacks of JDM in lesser moments.   
   >>   
   >>You already said that.  Now support it.   
   >   
   >   
   > Ah, shaddup, you overbearing harridan. I don't follow demands. I made   
   > my statement, and I'll follow it up in due time.   
   >   
      
   It's Saturday night, need I remind you? While all the smart pizza boys   
   are out running routes for big tips, here you are wallowing in the   
   bloody mess of your own splattered ass. How do you explain this?   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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