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   "Will Dockery"  wrote in message   
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   >> "Will Dockery"  wrote in message   
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   >> >> Sorry, I dropped to my knees, literally, laffing, at this CatShit   
   >> > below.   
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   >>   
   >> nice job leaving the dates out again, Drunkery!   
   >   
   > I can leave the dates if you want, Renny Skank James.   
      
   don't drink and type. I notice the name change.   
   worried this might show up on a Google search?   
      
   Renay   
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   >   
   >> okay, class, let's begin. below is a "poem"   
   >> obviously, if it was worth saving I'd have   
   >> rewritten it once I got a better handle and   
   >> some education on what poetry is. (NOTE:   
   >> it's not about heart, soul, etc.) so together let's   
   >> see what we can salvage. if not, let's simply   
   >> figure out where it all went so terribly wrong.   
   >   
   > You posted the crap, you must have thought it was good, huh?   
   >   
   >> (this exercise is not for Drunkery. first of all,   
   >> he's not bright enough to get anything out of   
   >> it.   
   >   
   > More to the point, the poems are too shitty for me to get anything out of   
   > them, other than a laugh.   
      
   more to the point, you're an obsessed asshead   
   who can't step up. wooden shoes pinch yer toes?   
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   >> >>  it don't hurt   
   >> >>   
   >> >>  she ain't hurt, that's what my grandpa said   
   >> >>  after I fell off the tractor   
   >> >>  she ain't hurt - and I wasn't   
   >> >>  grandma made me come in the house anyway   
   >>   
   >> first of all, there are too many words up there.   
   >> it interferes w/any possible rhythm. every extra   
   >> syllable has to go.   
   >   
   > The best idea would be to delete the piece of crap from the archives,   
   > Renny.   
      
   non-artful dodge noted. I thought we were gonna   
   discuss poetry. you're not just here to grind an axe,   
   are you?   
      
   grab a towel, Drunkery, you're bleeding on the carpet.   
      
   Renay   
      
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