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   From: renayspam@yahoo.com   
      
   "Will Dockery"  wrote in message   
   news:1109745963.895945.37330@l41g2000cwc.googlegroups.com...   
   > Renay wrote:   
   >> "Will Dockery"  wrote in message   
   >> >> it's interesting in a "holyshit, what was I thinking?" sorta way.   
   >> >> still, some of it I haven't seen in over a decade. (notice he   
   >> >> doesn't bother with anything that isn't 10 or more years old.   
   >> >   
   >> > *You* posted "Spectre" last year, Renny.   
   >> >   
   >> > I found the other bad poems when I went looking for the review I   
   > wrote   
   >> > of "Spectre", last year.   
   >>   
   >> mygawdyou'restupid.   
   >   
   > Coming from the writer of *this*, that's really... special:   
   >   
   > specter   
   >   
   >   
   > vicky haunts me still   
   > scarecrow, I called her behind her back   
   > her ugliness fascinated me   
   > made be beautiful by contrast   
   >   
   > I never gave her my time   
   > or my hand-me-down dresses   
   >   
   > she asked to be my friend   
   > but her stringy hair offended me   
   >   
   > we never went to lunch   
   > saw a movie   
   > traded gossip   
   > shared a secret   
   >   
   > I never asked her to forgive my unkindness   
   > but she fucked my husband   
   > so I guess we're even   
   >   
   >  Renay   
   >   
   > As I wrote before, white trailer trash to the bone.   
      
   so you're saying the trailer is white? I don't see   
   it. one of those shiny, silver Airstreams, maybe.   
      
   really, Drunkery, this one note of yours is   
   fingernails on a chalkboard. it's also a ripoff   
   *I* said white trash in the broadside, "Recycling   
   the White Trash" and *I* said trailer trash in the   
   title of a poem.   
      
   honest to, you've become drying paint. I thought   
   rebelstreetpoets would have more imagination.   
      
   Renay   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)