XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments, alt.poetry   
   From: LadyJaneAsherFwdBelow@Vaginas.net   
      
   On 2 Mar 2005 09:07:09 -0800, Will Dockery wrote:   
      
   > Jane Asher's Vagina wrote:   
   >> On Wed, 02 Mar 2005 06:20:40 GMT, Karla wrote:   
   >>   
   >>> Caring for Others   
   >>>   
   >>> Vestibule smelling of old potpourri,   
   >>> coat hooks above a mash of rubber,   
   >>> and in one corner, a tumbled umbrella.   
   >>> Flocked wallpaper, deep blue,   
   >>> electric candle sconces along the walls,   
   >>> shadow couch and shadow pillows.  The nameless   
   >>   
   >> Nameless? Let me help. Pure CatShit.   
   >   
   > Karla's poem, while it had some interesting and sometimes disturbing   
   > moments, is basically a convoluted mess.   
   >   
   > She desperately need to focus, and *edit*.   
   >   
   > As it is, *catshit* works as a one word critique: bad, over-written   
   > "poetry".   
      
   She has, again, marred the wart known as the Cabal. Slurpette Obnoxious,   
   rip a stripe of your sleeve.   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)