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|    j r sherman to All    |
|    Re: Three Bad Poems [part one]    |
|    02 Mar 05 12:43:52    |
      XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments, us.arts.poetry, alt.poetry       From: jrst@earthlink.net              In article <1109795253.811877.299760@o13g2000cwo.googlegroups.com>, Will       Dockery       says...       >       >       >j r sherman wrote:       >> In article <1109791624.035037.87340@l41g2000cwc.googlegroups.com>,       >Will Dockery       >> says...       >> >> >> >> > As I wrote before, white trailer trash to the bone.       >> >> >> >>       >> >> >> >> so you're saying the trailer is white? I don't see       >> >> >> >> it. one of those shiny, silver Airstreams, maybe.       >> >> >> >       >> >> >> > The type that stomps onto Jerry Springer, chomping cigarettes       >> >and       >> >> >> > throwing chairs, that's *you*.       >> >> >>       >> >> >> no, the question is, are you saying the trailer is white?       >> >> >       >> >> >I had assumed you no longer lived in a trailer.       >> >> >       >> >> >I'm more interested in what color Vicki's stringy hair was.       >> >> >       >> >> >Was she a blonde? A redhead?       >> >> >       >> >> >I'm curious, since your poem is so slack with details, as well as       >> >> >imagination, form or originality.       >> >> >       >> >> >This *are* poetry newsgroups, after all.       >> >>       >> >> and just who is the trailer-trash here?       >> >       >> >Heh. *I* live in a woodshed.       >>       >> you are the loser version of the Unibomber.       >       >*You* call the Unabomber a winner?              compared to you?              please.                     --       ------------------------------------------------------------------       "I saw a werewolf drinkin' a pina colada at Trader Vic's       And his hair was perfect."        Warren Zevon       ------------------------------------------------------------------              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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