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   j r sherman to All   
   Re: Three Bad Poems [part one]   
   02 Mar 05 12:43:52   
   
   XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments, us.arts.poetry, alt.poetry   
   From: jrst@earthlink.net   
      
   In article <1109795253.811877.299760@o13g2000cwo.googlegroups.com>, Will   
   Dockery   
   says...   
   >   
   >   
   >j r sherman wrote:   
   >> In article <1109791624.035037.87340@l41g2000cwc.googlegroups.com>,   
   >Will Dockery   
   >> says...   
   >> >> >> >> > As I wrote before, white trailer trash to the bone.   
   >> >> >> >>   
   >> >> >> >> so you're saying the trailer is white? I don't see   
   >> >> >> >> it. one of those shiny, silver Airstreams, maybe.   
   >> >> >> >   
   >> >> >> > The type that stomps onto Jerry Springer, chomping cigarettes   
   >> >and   
   >> >> >> > throwing chairs, that's *you*.   
   >> >> >>   
   >> >> >> no, the question is, are you saying the trailer is white?   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> >I had assumed you no longer lived in a trailer.   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> >I'm more interested in what color Vicki's stringy hair was.   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> >Was she a blonde? A redhead?   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> >I'm curious, since your poem is so slack with details, as well as   
   >> >> >imagination, form or originality.   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> >This *are* poetry newsgroups, after all.   
   >> >>   
   >> >> and just who is the trailer-trash here?   
   >> >   
   >> >Heh. *I* live in a woodshed.   
   >>   
   >> you are the loser version of the Unibomber.   
   >   
   >*You* call the Unabomber a winner?   
      
   compared to you?   
      
   please.   
      
      
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