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   From: Aetyr@nc.rr.com   
      
   Congratulations on your success, then.  I meant what I said though. I'm not   
   trying to squash you, or your signature poem.  Its in rough shape.  If you   
   like it, then you should work on it.  Its not good enough, you might be able   
   to do better. You shouldn't accept something in this kind of shape.   
   Pip   
   "Rob Evans"  wrote in message   
   news:I9JyMbQ6F1JCFwIY@mla001.demon.co.uk...   
   > In message , Pip   
   >  writes   
   > >Sorry Rob, but that qualifies as poetry in your mind only.  Its really   
   just   
   > >prose hacked into stanzas.  It has no internal music, or playful word   
   > >pyramids.  Its a fun prose read though, IF you were to relate it to a   
   story,   
   > >which, in the context of this "poem" is not related to a story.  It does   
   > >completely fail as a character sketch though, which is about as much as   
   you   
   > >could get out of it.  Frankly, I don't think that it could be edited to   
   the   
   > >point of publishing.  Good effort.  Keep trying.   
   >   
   > It has been published.  It has also been used as a poster poem for the   
   > Cheltehham Literature Festival.  It's also a "signature" poem that gets   
   > the most requests at public readings.  Maud and, more importantly,   
   > Maud's friends consider it to be an affectionate and accurate (only   
   > slightly exaggerated) character sketch.  As for the internal music,   
   > reading it aloud would reveal the stresses.   
   >   
   > It's not a great poem in my opinion but it's a good one by the opinion   
   > of many others.  And since many of them are prepared to pay to hear it,   
   > I think I can assume that they are not just being kind.   
   >   
   > Are you sure you wouldn't be more comfortable trying to bite Vagina?   
   > Ignorance is no disadvantage in that arena.   
   >   
   > Rob   
   > --   
   > Rob Evans   
      
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