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   >> Truly disgusting.   
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   > Sorry you're so sensitive, but that's also why I've tried rewrites over   
   > the years but just finally decided to settle on leaving it in the   
   > "Erotic poetry" genre.   
      
   There's nothing "erotic" about "putting (your) finger to her hole,"   
   Donkey.  You couldn't possibly have expressed it in less erotic terms.   
   It comes across as vulgar, impersonal, to the extent of being almost   
   mechanical.  As erotic literature, it's on a par with saying "I walked   
   into the men's room and took a dump."   
      
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