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   HarryLime to W.Dockery   
   Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery (2/2)   
   02 Feb 25 20:06:22   
   
   [continued from previous message]   
      
   >> And the fact that you still post it in 2025 means that you don't see   
   >> anything wrong with it.  Much the same way that you don't see anything   
   >> wrong in having written a poem about how you'd performed oral sex on a   
   >> co-worker (at the local pizzeria -- while you were married, and left it   
   >> lying around where your 6-year old son (give or take) could read it and   
   >> bring it to the attention of your wife.   
   >>   
   >> Oops!   
   >>   
   >>   
   >>>> Truly disgusting.   
   >>>>   
   >>>> --   
   >>>   
   >>> Sorry you're so sensitive, but that's also why I've tried rewrites over   
   >>> the years but just finally decided to settle on leaving it in the   
   >>> "Erotic poetry" genre.   
   >>   
   >> There's nothing "erotic" about "putting (your) finger to her hole,"   
   >> Donkey.  You couldn't possibly have expressed it in less erotic terms.   
   >> It comes across as vulgar, impersonal, to the extent of being almost   
   >> mechanical.  As erotic literature, it's on a par with saying "I walked   
   >> into the men's room and took a dump."   
   >>   
   >> --   
   >   
   > Thanks again for reading and commenting, Pendragon.   
   >   
   > I don't have time right now but I'll return soon for a more in depth   
   > response.   
      
   Ah! This was formerly expressed as "I'll get back to you this after I've   
   made a pot of coffee."  Needless to say, the coffee never materialized.   
      
   In this case, however, no response is required.   
      
   Your comments show that you lack adequate reading comprehension skills.   
      
   Your writing shows that you lack adequate compositional skills.   
      
   Your content shows that you lack even the most basic social and cultural   
   skills (outside of a Neanderthal clan, that is).   
      
   There is really nothing you can say that will alter the above facts.   
      
   Nothing.   
      
   If you had even so much as a double-digit intelligence, you would follow   
   my advice and enroll in a free online basic English course.   
      
   As you have a single-digit intelligence quotient, you will insist that   
   your writing is clear enough to you, and going being the jackass that we   
   all know you to be.   
      
   --   
      
   --- SoupGate-DOS v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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