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   >> And this is the end of the poem?   
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   >> What was the topic?  The speaker lying in the "Here" or "There"?  The   
   >> unknown person he was addressing?  Someone's life having passed -- or   
   >> passed by?  Contemplating returning to... something?  Or the bizarre   
   >> transformation of the morning light?   
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   >> I would like to say that this is bad, even for you, but it's really just   
   >> par for the course as Donkey poems go: incoherent, incompetently   
   >> written, and terminally uninteresting.   
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   > Did you note the title of the poem, as shown in the Carverlite Crappage?   
   >  "SHATT, RD" - The title describes the writing perfectly!   
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   Thanks everyone, for reading and commenting.   
      
   All comments and suggestions will be taken into consideration in the new   
   edited version.   
      
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   --- SoupGate-DOS v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)