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|    Ted Nolan |
|    RI June, July & August 2025 (4/6)    |
|    26 Oct 25 21:30:06    |
      [continued from previous message]              In her way Jessica Lin was a Golden Girl (but with less wrinkles       than Bea Arthur), tops in the academy and with a spotless service       record and command surely awaiting her. Until, that is, she was       unwisely loyal to someone who deserved no loyalty and lost her       career and even personal autonomy. Now, bullied, harassed and       unwilling to believe she deserves better, she has ended up in the       Fleet's cesspool.              Fate had thrown together two broken people. Could they fix each       other?              I read these on vacation, and I'll admit to staying up late by the       pool while the crickets sang in the woods behind the hotel. Despite       the heavy issues that set up the series, it moves right along, often       humorously given Mendoza's internal monologue after he somewhat       gets his act together. I think some amazon reviewers did not always       like the tone, given Jessica's very serious issues, but it worked       for me.              The series also surprised me several times. I assumed it would be       the standard "Captain gets himself together and makes his ship of       dregs into the Pride of the Fleet", but that's not the way it went       at all, electing to tell a more focused story. Not that it was a       small one, as Mendoza & Lin gradually get involved in interstellar       politics, gathering allies and betrayals, often from the same people       until it finally seems that fate has smiled, when the pair once       again fail to do the expected thing.              The series is not over, and Book 9 is due to drop on 31 December.                     Swords, Cider, and Other Distractions: A Glass Immortals Novella       by Brian McClellan       https://amzn.to/4m5Q2tP              The start of this novella (whose cover unfortunately does not live       up to the title) sees Demir Grappo a former commander in the       Romanesque Ossan Empire at the lowest point in his life. In the       first book of the series, we met him mostly well after this, when       he was still hurting but functional. Here the wounds of the massacre       of Holikan are too fresh, and he is wandering aimlessly, barely       able to put one foot in front of the other or feed himself.              Luckily (or possibly through forces stronger than Luck) he comes       into his first glance at the Big Picture of forces outside of the       Ossan glass-based magic system when, at his almost terminal point,       he meets a questing squire of the Court of Lilies (They're not a       sex cult!), who is seeking the villains who murdered one of her       order's paladins and stole his sword:               Ciata ignored the locals and continued to follow her quarry's        trail past countless vineyards and wineries. After days of        monotonous riding the road finally turned to follow along        the side of a massive gorge. She could see where the gorge        let out into a river further on--and the river had riverboats.        Real traffic.               The road turned to cross the gorge by way of a breathtaking        bridge. Ciata actually got down from Penny and led the horse        across on foot, just so she could really enjoy the view up        and down the gorge and its towering cliffs. The bridge        itself must have been a quarter of a mile across. A true        genius of human workmanship. Witness the works of man and        rejoice, the goddess Selease instructed her followers.               Ciata wasn't the only one enjoying the view either. A young        man was doing the same further on, and Ciata prepared a        word of greeting as she approached. He was her height--short        for a man. He wore a ratty tunic shredded by travel and        weather, caked in mud. At his belt was a wineskin. His black        hair was unkempt and his beard patchy. The young man had        not even noticed her presence. He leaned too far out over        the canyon, the expression on his face distant. Even at the        poor angle, she could see the sorrow in his eye. It affected        her instantly, causing her to pay closer attention.               He leaned out farther and farther, reaching in the open sky        for something she couldn't see. A skip and a jump and Ciata        was on him. She snagged him by his belt, bracing herself        on the low stone wall that lined the bridge. He was a heavy        bugger. He almost pulled her down with him, but Ciata braced        her legs and yanked back, wrestling him to the ground and        straddling him to keep him in place.               He was chubby from excess, though not fat, with the olive-toned        skin of an Ossan, close-set ears, and a face marked by smile        lines. He couldn't have been much younger than her--maybe        twenty, twenty-one--but there was an incredible weight in        his eyes.                Her favorite scripture came to mind. Show love and kindness        to the broken, for a storm rages inside of them that you        can't imagine.                "Why did you do that?" he asked. He seemed to struggle to        focus on her face.                "You were going to fall!"                "Was I?"                "Sure looked like it to me."                Everything about his face changed instantly. His eyes        focused. Gone was the sorrow. He regarded her with sudden        and intense interest. "Hmm. Maybe. Maybe not. You're very        cute."                It was a compliment clearly meant to distract her. Ciata        fended it off. No, no. This would not work on her. She        recognized the look of a broken person, and she immediately        knew two things about this young man: he liked women, and        he knew how to hide his pain. "I'm not going to let you        kill yourself."                "Why not?" he asked with a half smile that showed one        adorable dimple.                "Because it wouldn't be right."                "Says who?"                "Says me. I am a questing squire of the Court of Lilies, a        holy paladin of the goddess Selease, and I am sworn to help        the downtrodden."                The young man blinked up at her. He sure didn't seem to        mind that he was lying beneath her. In fact, he gave a        little wiggle to get himself more comfortable. She couldn't        let that distract her either. "I assure you, miss, I am not        the downtrodden."                "I beg to differ. Now tell me truthfully, does this thing        you're fighting have to do with a girl? Because whoever        they are, they're not worth it. You'll find someone else."                "It's not a broken heart," the young man replied with that        wounded half smile. It was at once pathetic and compelling.        She thought of more of that same scripture verse. Guard        your heart against these broken, lest they force their        burden upon you. Wise words from the goddess. Ciata rubbed        her nose. Her new friend smelled...aggressively.                "I'll let you up if you promise not to jump."                "Hm."                "What do you mean by that?"                "I'm thinking about it."                "Is it that hard of a decision?"                "At the moment, what's on top of me is more pleasant than what's at the       bottom of that canyon."                Ciata rolled her eyes. "You're a cad."                "Did you say you're a Seleasian?"                "That's right."                "You're a sex cultist?"                Ciata made a strangled sound in the back of her throat and        punched him in the shoulder. The young man winced.                "I guess not?"                "No, we're not a sex cult! I'm surprised you've heard of us at all."                "Would you prefer to speak in Balkani?" he asked, switching        languages. To her surprise, his accent was almost perfect.        Perfect southern Balkani, but still very good.                The change of languages did catch her off guard. He was        still trying to distract her. Frustratingly, it was working.        "I haven't spoken to anyone in Balkani in weeks! How do you        know it so well?"                "I've spent a lot of time up north."                "You don't look it."                "How would I look it?"                "You're very soft."                His eyes narrowed.                "It's not an insult!" she protested. "I like soft people. They tend to be       better lovers."                "Good to know."                      [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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